Friday 5 May 2017
Reading
Kia Ora this is my reading for this week. Please comment to let me know what I need to improve on thank you.
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Hi Susan have read through your blog and I think your writing is very good. I did found 2 grammar mistakes go through your ANZAC blog and see if you can find them. Countries start with capitals and its just Turkey not the turkey you could put the Turkish. Well done daughter.
ReplyDeleteGreat feedback Jacqui, I will give Susan time today to edit her work. Thanks for your input, it's so good to see whanau involved in blogging.
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