Kia Ora everybody this is my Writing for this week please comment down below what I need to work on and if I have made any mistakes. Thank you
Friday 19 May 2017
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Hi Amanda, my name is Dorothy and I am a student in Manukau/Room 8 at Waikowhai Primary school. I love your blog post even though I kind of disagree. I like how you have strongly stated you opinion and stood up for what you want. I have looked through your blog and have see that you have done a lot of slides. Have you thought about using a drawing or a document? Your post made me think about me helping my grandma at home because she is not really good with devices. If you would like to check out my learning my blog is http://wpsdorothyb.blogspot.co.nz/ .
ReplyDeleteHi Susan, My name is Angelina and I really like what you have written about why Facebook is good for children. I agree that if children are responsible and they are cybersmart, then it would be okay for them to use Facebook. What do you think will happen if the children that are using Facebook are not cybersmart?
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